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4. Data Analysis
4.1 Clause-to-clause Contrast between the SLT and the TLT
Following Fang et al (1995:245), both the SLT and the TLT are broken down into clauses consisting of a single thematic structure and a single transitivity structure. As an overview, it is found that, whilst the English text is made up of twenty-five clauses, with a total of 177 words, its Chinese counterpart is composed of twenty-eight clauses containing 286 words (see Appendixes 3 and 4). In order to measure the degree of textual equivalence that has been obtained during the translation, the TLT is contrasted with its English original clause by clause. From this contrast, it is observed that 80% textual equivalence has been acquired, when twenty of the twenty-five SLT clauses find representation in the TLT, while three are combined and two omitted in the translation, as shown in Table 1 below. Besides the strategies of combination and deletion, the translator has also employed the strategy of addition, and as a result, seven more clauses are added in the TLT. This thus serves as the presupposition of the paper, that is, some textual meaning is lost in the process of the translation. The paper thus sets out to see how the translator manages to compensate for the meaning that gets lost.

¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡Table 1 Clause-to-clause contrast between the SLT and the TLT


SLT

TLT

Clause
No.

Clause No.

Strategies employed in translation

Translation

Addition

Combination

Deletion

1

3

1

 

 

2

2

4

 

 

3

 

 

7

 

4

5

 

 

 

5

6

 

 

 

6

 

 

7

 

7

8

 

 

 

8

9

 

 

 

9

10

11

 

 

10

12

 

 

 

11

13

14

 

 

12

 

 

 

Deleted

13

17

15

 

 

14

18

16

 

 

15

19

 

 

 

16

 

 

 

 

17

 

 

 

Deleted

18

20

 

 

 

19

21

 

 

 

20

22

 

 

 

21

23

24

 

 

22

25

 

 

 

23

26

 

 

 

24

27

 

 

 

25

28

 

 

 

Total

20

7

2

2

4. 2 Strategies Analysis
What this means is that twenty percent of the original textual meaning is lost in the translation. In another word, there exists 20% difference between the SLT and the TLT as far as their textual meaning is concerned. In this part, discussion will centre around the non-equivalence on both the lexico-grammatical and discourse-semantic strata. Here we will see four strategies that have been adopted in the translation not only to compensate for the meaning loss, but also to better adjust the TLT to the TL audience. These strategies can also be called re-drafting strategies, and they include addition, explication and combination.
4. 2. 1 Addition
Addition means adding anything that is needed, such as a word, a phrase, or even a clause, in order to make the translated text appear natural, either grammatically or semantically, in the target language. This is a strategy a translator frequently resorts to when following the original pattern of information flow results in a tension between syntactic and communicative functions in the TLT (Baker, 1992:167). As far as my data is concerned, seven instances of addition are observed and the following is their analysis from a textual perspective.

The first addition appears at the very beginning of Clause 1 of the TLT, i.e., D¨¡ng n¨« kand¨¤o "when you see." Functioning as the Theme of the hypotactic projecting clause complex as demonstrated in the figure above, this addition explicitly foregrounds two things as the starting point for the following clause(s). One is the identification of the audiencen¨« "you" as the unambiguous interactant of the communication. Without such identification, Clause 3 that follows would sound obscure because it leaves out the topical Theme. The other thing that is made explicit here is a specification of temporal or the occasion k¨¤nd¨¤o "see...," which serves as a concrete time when the addressee's psyche n¨« hu¨¬buhu¨¬ xi¨¤nm¨´ b¨´y¨« "won't you admire them" occurs.

The second, third and fourth additions are realized in Clauses 4, 11 and 14. Grammatically, they share the same feature by consisting of an adverb plus a verb. Functionally, they all serve as a bridge between their foregoing and forthcoming clauses. As far as the second addition sh¨¨nzh¨¬ r¨¨nwe¨ª "[you] even think [that...]" is concerned, whilst the textual Theme, sh¨¨nzh¨¬ "even," serves to highlight the paratactic relation between Clause 3 and Clause 4, r¨¨nwe¨ª "think," further foregrounds and projects the assumed mentality of the audience. If the original Clauses 3, 4 and 5 had been directly transferred into the TL, the Chinese text would sound logically obscure.

The third addition bi¨¦ ta¨¬ ji¨¨y¨¬ "Don't be so concerned" or "Never mind," in Clause 11, not only functions as a friendly consolation to the audience, but also as a marker clause to move from the stage of problem identification to the stage of solution offering.

As for the fourth addition, which is Clause 14, i.e., r¨²h¨¦ ch¨´l¨« w¨¨nt¨ª "how to solve (deal with) the problem," it makes explicit what the original "a little sensibility" refers to. Apart from this, this addition has also bridged the gap between Clause 12, and Clauses 15, 16, 17 and 18. It creates space in which the advertiser's suggestions and services are introduced. Clauses 15 and 16 are therefore inserted as contrastive options against those put forward in Clauses 17 and 18. As such, the audience is clearly shown two extremes of choices: either "helplessly" (w¨²k¨§na¨§ h¨¦ ) admiring those women who are well-endowed in the chest area, or "immediately enquiring" (l¨¬k¨¨ x¨¶nw¨¨n) about our bust care service, or even trying it out! In contrast to the above-mentioned six additions that are all complete clauses, the seventh addition, i.e w¨¯men zh¨« ca¨«y¨°ng "we only adopt," supplies what has been omitted in Clause 20 in the SLT. This addition not only completes the ellipsed clause; it also highlights the techniques the advertiser employs for his/her bust care services.

4.2.2 Explication
Explication refers to the strategy of translation to express in explicit terms what is vague in the original texts. Looking at my data, the strategy of explication used by the translator can be subdivided into three categories, including change of process type, nominalization, and specification. The instances of these categories are respectively spelt out below.

4.2.2.1 Change of process type
When an English clause is translated into Chinese with a Process type different from its original, we say that a change of process type is realized. The Process types here are defined using Halliday and McDonald's (in press) four-way model. In the Chinese version, six instances of process change are observed. These are tabulated in Table 2 below, with a gloss under each Chinese clause.

¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡Table 2 Changes of process type made in the TLT

SLT

TLT

Original clause

Process
type

Translation

Process type

other women seem to be more well-endowed in the chest area

Rel:
Ascr.

T¨¡r¨¦n y¨­ngy¨¯u ji¨¡or¨¦n de me¨« xi¨­ng
Others have a charming chest area

Rel:
Poss.

these women seem to have it all

Rel:
Poss.

T¨¢men l¨¬zh¨¬ ti¨¡nsh¨¥ng
others are born beauties

Rel: Ascr.

[these women] appear more womanly

Rel:
Ascr.

[T¨¢men] w¨²sh¨ª w¨²k¨¨ b¨² za¨¬ s¨¤nf¨¡ dnngr¨¦n de t¨«ta¨¬ me¨«
[they] are displaying a graceful carriage all the time

Mat.

[it's] a growing psychological case as well

Rel:
Iden.

[Zh¨¨] ha¨ª y¨«ngxi¨¢ng le z¨¬x¨¬nx¨©n
[this] also affects [your] self-confidence

Mat.

be the object of sin

Rel:
Iden.

H¨¦b¨´ ch¨¢ngka¨© x¨©onghui
why not open wide your bosom

Mat.

make them envy your body

Ment.

Y¨­ngy¨¯u rang r¨¦n y¨¤n xi¨¤n de sh¨¥nca¨ª
have a figure that is the admiration of others

Rel:
Poss.

4.2.2. 2 Nominalization
According to Halliday (1994) nominalization is a process "whereby any element or group of elements is made to function as a nominal group in the clause" (p.41). It is the single most powerful resource for creating grammatical metaphor (ibid:352). Nominalization in translation involves metaphorically rendering into a nominal group or phrase what are originally "processes (congruently worded as verbs) and properties (congruently worded as adjectives)" (ibid: 352). From Table 3 below, it can be seen that four nominalizations are employed in the translation. Among them, three concern transferring English adjective phrases of Attribute (properties) into nominal groups, while one involves a conversion from a Process. If we look closely at the structure of these nominalizations, it can be observed that all the nominalizations consist of an Epithet plus Thing (Halliday, 1994:185). Comparison with the original of each nominalization enables us to see that the Epithets are in fact derived from the adjective or verbal element of original clause. It follows that "well-endowed" is rendered into ji¨¡or¨¦n de ("charming") "womanly" into r¨¢ng r¨¦n y¨¤nxi¨¤n de ("causing people to admire"). In these two cases, the Things m¨§i xi¨­ng ("beautiful chest") and t¨«ta¨¬ me¨« ("charm of figure") are added by the translator according to the context.

¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡Table 3 Nominalization in the TLT


SLT

Nominalization/ Metaphorical Translation
in the TLT

Clause

Grammatical
Category

other women seem to be more well-endowed in the chest area

adjective

T¨¡r¨¦n y¨­ngy¨¯u ji¨¡or¨¦n de me¨« xi¨­ng
others have a charming chest area

[these women] appear more womanly

adjective

T¨¡men] s¨¤nf¨¡ d¨°ngr¨¦n de t¨«ta¨¬ me¨«
[others]...display a graceful carriage

It's normal to feel this way

adjective

Zh¨¨ sh¨¬ zh¨¨ngch¨¢ng de x¨©nl¨«
it's a normal psyche

make them envy your body

verb

Y¨­ngy¨¯u r¨¤ng r¨¦n y¨¤n xi¨¤n de sh¨¥ncai
Have a figure that is the admiration of others

In dealing with the third and fourth clauses, a slightly more complicated strategy is employed. With regard to the third nominalization, it can be seen that, while the Epithet zh¨¨ngch¨¢ng de ("normal") derives from the original adjective "normal," the Thing x¨©nl¨«i ("psyche") resulted from the Process verb "to feel." As far as the fourth nominalization is concerned, whilst the Process verb "envy" is transferred into an Epithet r¨¤ng r¨¦n y¨¤n xi¨¤n de ("causing people to admire"), the Thing sh¨¥ncak ("physical figure") comes indirectly from the original "body."

¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡Table 4 Specifications made in the TLT

SLT

Specifications in the Translation

(Don't you just) hate it

(hu¨¬buhu¨¬) xi¨¤nm¨´ b¨´y¨«
(won't you) admire them a lot

(have) it all

l¨¬zh¨¬ ti¨¡nsh¨¥ng
[they are] born beauties

this feeling of inadequacy

sh¨¡o xijn "d¨¡nb¨®" de sh¨¥ncak
[your] slightly "thin" figure

It is sinful (to think about it)

z¨¬c¨¢nx¨ªngku¨¬
feel self-abased

a physical thing

sh¨¥nduan sh¨¤ng de qu¨¥h¨¤n
an inadequacy of the (body) figure

([it's]) a psychological thing as well

(ha¨ª y¨«ngxi¨£ng le) z¨¬x¨¬nx¨©n
(and also affects) [your] self-confidence

(we expect) a little sensibility

(d¨­ngde) r¨²h¨¦ ch¨´l¨« w¨¨nt¨ª
(understand) how to deal with the problem

See

q¨©nsh¨¥n g¨¡nshnu
experience by (for) yourself

be the object of sin

ch¨£ngka¨© xi¨­nghuak
open wide [your] bosom

visit us now

qi¨¢n la¨ª ji¨¥sh¨°u h¨´l¨« f¨²w¨´
come and have [bustcare] service

4.2.2.3 Specification
In the translated advertisement, ten specifications are made to things that originally are very abstract and general in terms of their meaning or reference. The purpose of these specifications is to avoid the vagueness that would have otherwise resulted from a direct translation of the original. Tabulated above are the instances of specification the translator has made in the TLT.

4.2.3 Combination
The third strategy the translator has adopted while rendering the English advertisement into Chinese is the strategy of combination. According to the specific context, combination may involve incorporating more than one clause element, or even integrating more than one clause into just one group or clause. Combination has the advantage of avoiding redundancy or repetition that would have resulted from translating a TLT by following its original pattern of information flow. Concerning the short English advertisement, two combinations have been made in the translation process. The first combination occurs in Clause 3 and Clause 6 of the SLT when they are put together and translated into Clause 7 in the TLT. The second combination is derived when Clauses 11 and 12 of the SLT are combined and translated into Clause 13 in the Chinese text. These are demonstrated in Figure 2 below.

¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡Table 5 Combinations made in the TLT


SL Clauses

Combination Made in translation

It's sinful to think about it.

B¨´ z¨¬ju¨¦ de, [n¨«] du¨¬ z¨¬j¨ª sh¨¡o xi¨¢n "d¨¡ nb¨­" de sh¨¥ncaz¨¬c¨¢nx¨ªngku¨¬ ¡£
Subconsciously, [you] feel inferior about the slightly "thin" figure of yours

But for the lesser blessed ones, there's this feeling of inadequacy.

But for smart women like you, we expect a little sensibility.

Xi¨¤ng n¨«n zh¨¨y¨¤ng y¨©we¨¬ c¨­ngm¨ªng de x¨©n x¨·x¨¬ng, y¨ªnggai d¨­ngde (r¨²h¨¦ ch¨´l¨« w¨¨nt¨ª)¡£
For a wise woman of the new times as you, [you] should know better about [how to deal with the problem

 


1. Are the manual and automatic counts made?

2. What criteria are set?

3. Are any definitions provided?

4. How are the English clauses compared and contrasted with their Chinese translations?

5. Are any categories made?


Task 1 - Task 2

 
 
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